LANDING PAGE ROAST
I'll Tell You Exactly Why Your Landing Page Isn't Converting for $100.
Want an Expert Copywriter to Unlock Your Website's 2025 Revenue Potential?
If my roast doesn't give you at least 3 changes you can act on immediately, I'll refund your $100. All I ask is you tell me why so I can do better next time.
Most landing pages bleed leads and the business owner has no idea why. Bad headline. Weak offer. Confusing layout. Or all three.
For $100, I'll screen-record myself going through your landing page and tell you what's working, what isn't, and what I'd do differently. Get honest feedback from a copywriter who's been writing and building B2B websites since 2016.
Here's you can expect:
- A Messaging Audit —I'll evaluate your website copy to ensure it speaks to the right audience, drives engagement, and aligns with your business goals.
- Design Insights — Suggestions to improve the visual flow and usability of your website to keep visitors engaged longer.
- Optimization Opportunities — I'll identify specific areas where your website could convert more visitors into leads or sales.
- Actionable Checklist — In addition to the video, you'll receive a clear, one-page summary of recommended changes you can implement yourself (or hire me to do for you).
If you like what you receive, and we’re a good fit, we can discuss how I can help take your website to the next level. If not, the plan is yours to keep—no strings attached.
Expert Video Review
I'll record a 15–20 minute screen-share where I walk through your landing page and tell you exactly what's working, what's not, and what I'd change.
Messaging & Conversion Fixes
Specific changes to your headline, offer, layout, and CTAs — focused on turning more visitors into leads. Whether you're running ads or trying to rank, I'll show you what's holding the page back.
Actionable Checklist
You get a prioritized checklist of everything I found, ready to hand to your developer or implement yourself.